(this blog is dedicated to my little abuelita) My Little Abuelita whose pseudo name was LUPE when she worked as a bartender passed away last April during the National Poetry Month)(NaPoWriMo) We all miss her and I wrote my ass off last year so I will write my ass off this year. Watch out for all you Pochitas with Attitudes, get a load of ME!
Tuesday, April 9, 2013
Ottava Rima Poem #8 Prompt #8
a songs invigorate attempt a mistake
b Before my smiles and Cries bring a sea
a The Means, A cognitive duty, update
b Finds dendrites in brains to reconstruct me
a I, determined to beat this, to RETAKE
b Recovery to meet tranquility
c exhilarating insight mind myself
c Many cycles pass to find a lost self
Deborah Leon Godinez Copyright ©2013
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dendrites are great symbols for everything we meet.
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